Some people believe that to be successful at sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful.
Discuss both views and give your opinion ?
There has been split opinion regarding the individual's success at sport. While, some believe that one should possess the inborn talent to be successful, others vote that determination and regular practice helps to meet success. In my opinion, I think daily dedicated serious practice can help the desired sports person to thrive at a particular sport.
On the one hand, a number of human beings think that natural skills with which a person is born makes him successful in a particular sport. In other words, certain individuals have an inborn talent, helping them to learn vivid techniques and different skills required for a sport with ease; thereby, achieving success. For instance, Sania Newhal, a well-known badminton star had a natural ability to play the forward stroke that helped her to become the youngest badminton player from India. Thus, having a natural ability helps a person to become proficient and successful at the sport.
On the other hand, a handful of people believe that working seriously towards a particular game and regular practice helps a person to accomplish their goals and be successful. They point to the fact that every person is not only born with same abilities but also same opportunities, and it is an individual's commitment and dedication towards the sport that helps him to become a star. Unlike a natural ability sports person who relies only on his inborn talent, a person with regular practice and sincere commitment learns and develops various unique skills and abilities that help him to succeed even in difficult situations For example, Sachin Tendulkar, the world's top-notch cricketer who is known for his regular practice and commitment towards game and Vinod Kambli, a natural stroke player, entered in cricket league together, but it was Sachin Tendulkar who was able to heighten in all formats of game because of his dedication towards hard work, and Vinod Kambli was only able to succeed in a particular format that too for a limited period. As a result, it can be said that regular commitment towards a game benefits a person to master various unique skills; therefore, become successful.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I think practising regularly and sincere dedication towards a game help a sportsperson to possess various skills and learn different techniques. This assists sportsman to accomplish their goals and thrive success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25765306122 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69542318059 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474489795918 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.014669733 49.4020404114 294% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.538461538 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1538461538 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6153846154 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244457409359 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111111989314 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603337277164 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16890943381 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082711396898 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.