Some people believe that it is important to give gifts to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show that we care. DIscuss both views and give your opinion:
When it comes to giving gifts to loved ones, experts have split opinions. While some people believe that it is vital to give presents to friends and family to display that we care about them, others think that there are other superior options. In my opinion, I think that there are better alternatives to display care than giving presents.
Discussing the view of why people support that giving gifts is crucial to show that we care about family and friends is gifts display the unseen feelings of individuals. In other words, presents can share the feelings and importance of an individual, which cannot be communicated by words or music. For example, according to a recent survey in western India, most of the people who received presents on different occasions from their family and friends agreed that they not only were surprised but also felt happy and wanted; thus, gifts act as a token of love and feelings for loved ones.
Focusing on the view of why people regard other alternatives than giving presents as a better way to display care for family and friends is supporting during rough times and helping in monetary terms assist people and displays affection in a more prolific manner. To be more precise, helping hand during tough times and supporting financially when needed can prove to be a better alternative to show care for loved ones. For example, when a family friend is in a shortage of liquid funds and needs interest free money for a small duration, assisting him during that time displays the true care of a person.
To conclude and put forward my opinion, I certainly favour the view that a helping hand, when needed and aiding in monetary terms than gifting presents, are better options to show care towards friends and family.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, while, for example, i think, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88372093023 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42877366438 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504983388704 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7101228557 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433875786349 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192067589249 0.084324248473 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145255054979 0.0667982634062 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277257812663 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109454985144 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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