Most people prefer ready to eat food than home-made food now.
Do you think it has more advantages or more disadvantages?
Nuclear families and new working culture have changed the way people cook food. Many individuals opt for convenience food these days rather than home-cooked food. In my opinion, there are more drawbacks for people in consuming ready to eat food compared to food cooked at home.
Admittedly, there are some benefits of packaged food. Firstly, since it can be cooked easily, it saves a lot of time. In other words, all the pre-requisite of preparing food has been done and the person has to just cook the last part. For instance, ready to eat Punjabi curry can be made in ten to fifteen minutes compared to an hour required to prepare from scratch at home. Secondly, convenience food is helpful because it has the required taste which helps people to satisfy their hunger. Packaged food is prepared to keep in mind the taste of people and their choice, which give people an opportunity to consume tasty food rather than what they would have prepared; thus, ready to eat food is prefered by many people these days.
Nevertheless, despite the benefits mentioned above, I believe that packaged food has more concerning drawbacks. One potential problem is that convenience food does not contain an adequate amount of carbohydrates, proteins, vitamins and necessary minerals. Unlike the fresh food prepared at home which is healthy, ready to eat food concentrates more on taste than necessities of various requisites for the human body. Another negative aspect is that ready-made food contains too many preservatives which are bad for human health. Because food has to be stored for a longer duration before finally being prepared, preservatives are added to keep it fresh and eatable which affects the human body. For example, according to the recent survey of a known magazine conducted in western India among the people aged between 27-35, 65% of people became obese and fell ill once in a month by consuming ready to eat food. Hence, consuming packaged food can have serious consequence to an individual's health.
In conclusion, due to the unavailability of necessary nutrients and harmful preservatives in convenience food, it can cause more issues to people than any minor advantages it might bring.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 978, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...food can have serious consequence to an individuals health. In conclusion, due to the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09917355372 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71974083092 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531680440771 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6768717338 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.882352941 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3529411765 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392079169943 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140642313932 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928860022832 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271379504613 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462789561969 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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