Some parents think its good to have their children mobile phones, others disagree?
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although some people think that it is good these days if children own cell phones, others think it is of no use. In my opinion, I think children should not be given mobile phones as it can lead to addiction and wrong usage.
On the one hand, some people think that it is better if children own cell phones. They think that cell phones can not only act as an emergency device for when of danger but can also help in communicating with their children. As both the parents are working in today's time, it helps them to be in touch with their kids and keep them informed about their activities. For example, according to a recent survey, 40% of parents feel good at the workplace when they communicate with their children twice a day through cell phones. As a result, cell phones have become an important communicating device between parent and children.
On the other hand, some people believe that giving cell phones to children is of no use. They point to the fact that children use it for socializing and playing games, which divert their attention from studies. For instance, 45% of children who own cell phones were caught using them between the lectures in school. Moreover, following too many social websites can lead to bad habits in children like bullying, delinquency, and truancy. Therefore, it is better if children do not have cell phones which encourages them to spend time studying and participating in extracurricular activities at school.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I think children ought to not be given cell phones. Having this device can not only make them addictive but also expose to bad habits, which will divert their attention from the main aim of studies. Communicating in case of emergency have been taken care by schools and teachers these days, so instead of providing extra safety to the children, they ought to be sincere and independent for their own schedule, which is a need of an hour.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78402366864 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55335042707 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497041420118 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7056435505 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284171968507 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114037504621 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636356377331 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197778369465 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614028809788 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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