The invention of a mobile phone is considered to be one of the biggest breakthrough obtained in the communication field. Nowadays, people cannot even imagine their life without cellphones. In an atmosphere like this, restricting the use of mobile phones by youngsters cannot be considered sensible in any way. Undoubtedly, some people may support the idea of denying the mobile-phones to the children, but an idea like this will only have detrimental effects on their overall lives.
In this age of technological advancements, competition has increased in every sector. To tackle the cut-throat competition, children should have technical knowledge with access to all types of computers including mobile-phones. Furthermore, mobile phones are no longer just a piece of equipment to talk to another person but are now considered are small computer without different useful applications installed. These applications are immensely helpful with many activities such as studying, sending messages, to initiate a video call, to navigate while riding, etc.
Apart from this, to put a restriction on a child to use a mobile phone will not only increase his ignorance about technology as well as about real-time information but will also make him more rebellious and tame between his friends. Without mobile-phones, children may not be able to contact their parents in need. Similarly, parents won’t be able to keep any track of their children.
Having said so, let the children use their mobile-phones freely can also not be thought of as a wise act. Parents should ensure that they keep an eye out to monitor their children’s mobile-phones related activities as heavy usage of mobile phones by children and activities such as playing video games on the phones may result in violent behavior in the long run.
In essence, mobile phones have become the lifeline of the people and children cannot be pressurized to live without them. In my opinion, parents must make sure that their offspring is on the right track with this revolutionary piece of technology, so that children could have all the benefits from it.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, similarly, so, well, while, apart from, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27433628319 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03641144569 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557522123894 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6865832634 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.2 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224710227366 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868990697446 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661350193628 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140181866351 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423514797024 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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