Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
In this age of technological advancements, people (mainly youngsters) prefer to use social media to communicate with each other. Even though social media websites like Facebook may not be harmful to a community, I believe it certainly has detrimental effects on an individual. This essay will discuss the effects of social media sites on a community and an individual user.
Social media sites such as Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, etc get used on a big scale nowadays. Most the users share their personal information on these sites but they don’t understand the risk of uploading it on the internet. As a matter of fact, sharing the sensitive information on these sites makes users’ identities vulnerable to the hackers who could hack and use that information for their personal gains which might result in the case of stone identity or any sort of monetary loss.
Apart from that, there are few subscribers who use these platforms to spread fake news and to make derogatory comments about someone or something which may create a war-like situation between two communities.
Social media platform are actually beneficial for a community if it is used in the right direction. As these sites get accessed by millions of people almost daily, it can be used for advertisements purposes and to cascade any useful information which would help the local community.
In essence, social media platforms don’t have any life themselves but just software; hence they can’t be blamed about creating bad effects on people or communities. It depends on the users how do they want to use it. If they decide to lead these platforms in right direction, it will only bear sweet fruits and if they don’t, it’ll make clouds rain fire.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...identity or any sort of monetary loss. Apart from that, there are few subscribe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, if, may, so, apart from, sort of, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14335664336 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8549737912 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0631464412 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.583333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116037344978 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528602780016 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404864979968 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0625178492334 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415355150467 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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