Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money.
How might having a lot of money make people happy?
What other things in life can make people happy?
It is thought by many people that the principle way to be happy is to own too much of money. Having a lot of it can help a human being to satisfy their want, however, there are various other aspects in life-like job satisfaction and being liked by loved ones which can make individual's happy.
Firstly, possessing a lot of money can help a person to satisfy their want. Human beings can buy whatever they want without worrying about their monthly budget or any other financial issue. For instance, according to a recent survey of people between the age 32-37, 45% of the people believed that having a lot of money makes them feel jovial to buy the branded attire of their choice; thereby, satisfying their desired wishes by possessing enough money.
Secondly, having a satisfying job also make people happy. Since a person is doing what he loves and is able to give effect to his role, he is more happy with it without being too much concerned about money. Another point to consider is that living with people who makes you feel important and love you is also a vital reason for human being's happiness. For example, people in developed countries agree that people who stay in joint families in developing countries, where family members enjoy festivals together and share a good bonding among them are happier than them. Thus, an enjoyable job and living with people who like you are a couple of pivotal factors that help in making people feel good.
In conclusion, while money is an important factor contributing in making people happy, but there are also other significant aspects in human being's life-like job-satisfaction and having a support of loved ones which play an important role in making people happy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: be
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Suggestion:
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Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
...ontributing in making people happy, but there are also other significant aspects in human beings lif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82094594595 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45412390885 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523648648649 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.5716130458 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.727272727 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413723361897 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166300329308 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727474543221 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27363094656 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531943839535 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.