You want to take a course related to your work. Write a letter to your employer.
In your letter, you should:
describe what the course is
explain how it will benefit the company
give suitable time schedule.
Dear Mr Mehta,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in doing an accounting course at EH computer classes.
The course taken by EH computer classes on " Technicalities of Tally" teaches the technical aspects of the new tax system in detail. It majorly focuses on fetching vivid accounting reports, calculation of tax and vital tips and techniques to maintain proper accounts.
Since there has been an enormous change in the tax structure, our department is facing too much difficulty. Many of the employees are not able to understand the new tax system. Therefore, I am interested in learning from experts and cater the same learning to my subordinates and colleagues at the organization.This will aid our organization to get equipped with the new tax system and make minimal mistakes while filing crucial tax returns.
The course time is from 8 to 10 on weekdays and 9 to 12 on weekends. As I will be late by an hour in the morning, I will try to cover up my work by coming on weekends. My subordinates and colleagues have decided to devote an extra hour after office to learn the same concepts from me.
I solicit your co-operation.
Hoping for your positive reply.
Yours sincerely
John Patel
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 312, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ates and colleagues at the organization.This will aid our organization to get equipp...
^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...kes while filing crucial tax returns. The course time is from 8 to 10 on weekd...
^^^^
Line 15, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...subordinates and colleagues have decided to devote an extra hour after office to ...
^^
Line 15, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... after office to learn the same concepts from me. I solicit your co-operati...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97607655502 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97576884207 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.118220208 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135032376982 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603514072845 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555202854162 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816318665956 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485671162845 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.