Some people agree that children should ask for the parent's advice. Some disagree.
Discuss both views and share your own opinion.
Although some people believe that juveniles ought to seek their parent's advice, other people think that children should not ask for parents opinion. In my opinion, I think children ought to take the parent's opinion which will help juveniles to take better decisions in the early stage of their life.
On the one hand, some human beings think that children should look at their parents for useful advice. They point to the fact that juveniles are not mature enough to make crucial decisions on various matters which can affect their future life; therefore, seeking parents advice on such important matters can not only help them in making practical decisions but also help in understanding better. For instance, when a child is in dilemma to choose an optional subject in academics and does not have a deep understanding about the importance of each subject, experienced parents opinion and knowledge can help juveniles to understand that subject better and than take the right decision. Therefore, seeking parents help in the various confusing situation can help children take a prime decision after understanding all the options properly.
On the other hand, some people think that children should not seek their parent's advice. They believe that by doing so juveniles will become dependent in their life and will always need a helping hand in future. For example, according to a recent survey of children in northern India, 65% of children who took various decisions consulting their parents, faced enough difficulty taking some crucial decisions while at work. Hence, dependency on parents during childhood makes juveniles suffer once they enter the job market.
To summarize, while people may vary in their opinion, I think children ought to take their parent's advice to differentiate or ease out their choices on different matters and understand each difficult situation in a more detailed way. Since parents are more experienced and think for the betterment of their children, consulting parents will help juveniles in a positive way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
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Suggestion:
...sions in the early stage of their life. On the one hand, some human beings think...
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Line 3, column 657, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...s to understand that subject better and than take the right decision. Therefore, see...
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Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ife and will always need a helping hand in future. For example, according to a recent sur...
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... suffer once they enter the job market. To summarize, while people may vary in t...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... consulting parents will help juveniles in a positive way.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... will help juveniles in a positive way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28048780488 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56207148446 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484756097561 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8587176091 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.333333333 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227937701697 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127107606924 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119511153218 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179795138909 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727211728994 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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