Some people agree that children should ask for the parent's advice. Some disagree.
Discuss both views and share your own opinion.
It is often argued that children should always take suggestions from their parents. In my opinion, although at times it is acceptable to allow free space for the children to do certain kinds of tasks, there should have a comfort zone between children and parents so that advice can be sought always.
Children should be given freedom at times. When children exercise something on their own, it improves their skills such as creativity, analytical ability etc. For example, recent research shows that students who take frequent decisions independently have a better ability to lead a group or movement later. Therefore, it is important to give your child freed to decide on something at times to able to handle future hardships.
However, children should obviously take advice from their parents for all important decisions. While liberty is useful for them, it should be within the periphery of parents monitoring and control. Needless to say that, preschool children are anyway dependant on their parents. For school-going children or above, they must always ask their parents before making any big decisions. Otherwise, it not only can drive them towards the wrong path, it may pose threats to their safety and security also. A prime example is, children who choose their close friends unbeknown to their parents or go to a place regularly without informing their parents, often fall in the trap of drug addiction or even serious crimes. Therefore it is imperative for parents to create a comfort zone with their children so that they can share anything and ask for any decision whenever needed.
In conclusion, I believe, parents should grossly observe what their children are doing. While it is important to give children their space, parents should also create and maintain a friendly relation with their children so that they can ask for any help or advice, whenever required.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
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Suggestion: as well
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... drug addiction or even serious crimes. Therefore it is imperative for parents to create ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, however, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16233766234 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54101122924 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561688311688 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1943989585 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215322236036 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876065622056 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514547762931 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148546761394 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345691011168 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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