Your brother cannot come on a trip that you planned. Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to join instead. Please say
– Where and when do you plan to go?
– Why can’t your brother come?
– Give a short description of the trip.
Hi John,
I trust you must be doing good. I and my brother Kish were planning to visit Goa in the third week of August. However, due to unexpected circumstances, Kishore is not able to join me. So, I was thinking why can't you and I go for this amazing planned trip to Goa.
It's my 25th birthday on 18 August. We were planning to book tickets of train on the 17th evening so that we can reach Goa next day early morning and celebrate my special day there. There is one special train from Surat which starts at 8 pm on Thursday evening and will reach Goa next day early morning.
Kilgore has recently joined KCMG. He was planning to take a leave on Friday and enjoy a weekend with me at Goa and then resume back office on Monday, but unfortunately, he has to travel western zone with his manager for the quarterly sales meeting. Having joined the organization recently, taking leave is not possible for him; ergo, I was thinking why can't you and I go for a trip that we were planning from such a long time.
Talking about the things that I have planned to do in Goa are water sports activities, visiting sunset point and trying our luck in the famous "Delta In" casino. Moreover, I also was thinking to visit south Goa to have a look at the artificial dock that state government has developed recently.
I hope you will be able to join me on this wonderfully planned trip to Goa.
Waiting for your reply.
Best regards
Mayor Patel.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 208, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...able to join me. So, I was thinking why cant you and I go for this amazing planned t...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...r this amazing planned trip to Goa. Its my 25th birthday on 18 August. We were ...
^^^
Line 4, column 304, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will reach Goa next day early morning. Kilgore has recently joined KCMG. He was...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 354, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...sible for him; ergo, I was thinking why cant you and I go for a trip that we were pl...
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Line 14, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur reply. Best regards Mayor Patel.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, third, as to, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 267.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49438202247 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42801221278 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588014981273 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5132104849 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173233317884 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061120567194 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578476486208 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103698918822 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057634144381 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.