Your brother cannot come on a trip that you planned. Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to join instead. Please say
– Where and when do you plan to go?
– Why can’t your brother come?
– Give a short description of the trip.
Hello Tina,
How are you? Hope you are doing great. I want to invite you to the next weekend road trip, as my brother will not be joining us, you can hop in instead. I hope you have not changed your mind yet.
Along with me are Sweta, Riya and Rahul and we have finalized on going to Goa by road next weekend, 28th June. I’m sure Goa is a place where you also wanted to visit. Well seems like we will have a lot of fun on this trip.
Although Kush wanted to be a part of this plan, his client has requested for a meeting because of which he has to stay back and work on a presentation along with his team. However, we are happy that you can join us.
Just wanted to give you the itenary of this trip. We will be leaving by car on 28th night and staying in north Goa for 2 days and then moving to south goa for a day tourt and directly return home from there. Don't worry about the stay, Ram has invited us to stay at his place.
Hope to see you soon.
Cheers,
Abhishek
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello Tina, How are you? Hope you are doing great. I...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...a, Riya and Rahul and we have finalized on going to Goa by road next weekend, 28th June....
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Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this trip. Although Kush wanted to be a part of this plan, his client has requ...
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Line 9, column 209, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...rt and directly return home from there. Dont worry about the stay, Ram has invited u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, then, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.03553299492 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.82309134087 2.54303337028 72% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629441624365 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3564570536 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.1538461538 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219963176977 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847233448878 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709558116084 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121990344471 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942122435874 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.56 8.71597938144 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.06 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.