Some people believe that to be successful at sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful.
Discuss both views and give your opinion ?
There has been split opinion regarding the individual's success at sport. While some people believe that one should possess an inborn talent to be successful, others think that determination and regular practice helps to achieve success. In my opinion, I think daily dedicated serious practice is more essential to be successful at sports.
On the one hand, a number of human beings think that one has to possess an inborn ability to excel at sports. In other words, certain individuals have inborn talent which help them to learn vivid techniques and different skills required for sports. For instance, Sania Newhal, a well-known badminton star had a natural ability to play the forward stroke that helped her to become the youngest badminton player from India. Thus, having a natural ability helps a person to become proficient and successful at sports.
On the other hand, a handful of people believe that working seriously towards a particular game and regular practice can help a person to excel at sports. They point to the fact that every person is not only born with same abilities but also same opportunities, and it is an individual's commitment and dedication towards the sport that helps him to become a star. Unlike a natural ability sports person who relies only on his inborn talent, a person with regular practice and sincere commitment learns and develops various unique skills and abilities that help him to succeed even in difficult situations For example, Sachin Tendulkar, the world's top-notch cricketer who is known for his regular practice and commitment towards game and Vinod Kambli, a natural stroke player, entered in cricket league together, but it was Sachin Tendulkar who was able to achieve heights in all formats of game because of his dedication towards hard work, while Vinod Kambli failed to progress in his career after getting an initial breakthrough. As a result, it can be said that regular commitment towards a game benefits a person to master various unique skills; therefore, become successful.
In conclusion, despite the varying opinion of people, I think that one has to consistently practice and work hard, rather than rely on natural abilities, in order to be successful at sports.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15068493151 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6611527406 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501369863014 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.395774172 49.4020404114 304% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.666666667 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4166666667 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.9166666667 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267710282488 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124713459507 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717919417711 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20331444566 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818325908574 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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