These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?
In recent years, the role of parents is changing radically. Many fathers take the responsibility of home as well as their ward; whereas mother is a breadwinner. In relation to this, I believe this phenomenon occurs due to several situations, and indeed it is an appreciating advancement. Both the reasons and the positive aspects are discussed further with suitable examples.
Discussing the reason first, that why many fathers choose to sit at home and nurture their children, and mothers are pursuing their career. The most cogent reason that could be put forward is their exclusive traits and caliber. This is to say that women's posses extremely seldom attribute: patience along with good convincing skill. This catalyzes their enormous demand in many fields: air hostess, receptionist, secretary, nursing and many more. To add to this, females are now educated, if compared to the past they now have better know-how, talent and many arts that they can work outside
home. Special safety from the government and flexible working hours are other reasons for this occurrence.
Highlighting the reason why I acknowledge that fathers taking responsibility to unkeep home and children is an advantageous improvement. The biggest and most effective one is this helps maintain serenity at home. To illustrate this, when men do the domestic work: cleaning, cooking, washing clothes, and feeding the child- they empathize the importance of the hard work and efforts involved, in order to keep everything organized at home. Eventually, this alleviates the quarrel between the couple and elevates the understanding level. Another one is doing so, will create the chance to cater and breed fatherhood with the children. On the other hand, a mother can have some space for herself.
Thus, to conclude and offer my position, I can firmly say that certainly, it is a plus trend in terms of peace of at home, upbringing a child and good relationship between the loved ones, that
fathers are involved in performing domestic duties and women working out of their home.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2042042042 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78556978708 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597597597598 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6581259981 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.941176471 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11764705882 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342426879577 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970300726272 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603018130835 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166243417943 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577187676259 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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