Some people believe charity organizations should only offer help to people of their own countries. Others claim that these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live. do you agree?
it is often argued that voluntary firms should assist national individuals only rather than providing help and entertaining international people belonging to distinct geographical locations. this essay partially agrees with the phenomenon of offering their support to foreigners. The reasons for the same are justifying below with imperative examples.
The prime reason attached to this trend is an act of kindness. The vast majority of nations believe such things as an essential way of humanity. Indeed different citizens from several parts of the world have their own abilities to solve any dangerous medical issues or any kind of general problem. Besides this, the key persons of all countries think that sharing their hands with other one assist them to gain more respect among others, and eventually it helps to the local to cross international boundaries and get a chance to develop themselves. For example, In this pandemic time of the coronavirus, India comes ahead and sent the raw material for vaccination to the other developed nations in the form of medicines.
On the other hand, many orthodox families think that each and every country are always worried about their local people only at a time of emergencies. Because of this priority culture, people generally tend to entertain their nationalities only. For instance, In this crisis time, many underdeveloped nations had prioritized their people to supply the vaccination irrespective of giving to all.
In conclusion, with discussing the above points it is clear that support needs to be given to inter and intra nations both. I am of the firm belief that supports should be given to human beings irrespective of their nation they are located from.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26811594203 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81289190133 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63768115942 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5719753263 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.846153846 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198507710258 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659758149927 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514440996526 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119631224506 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538235680329 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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