Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
An all-round education system of any institution is only considered as a complete one, when there is a balance between studies and leisure activities for the children. However, a changing trend has been observed which believes that leisure activities are a complete waste of time if they are not educational. I strongly disagree with this notion and believe that it should be a vital part of all educational institutions.
Firstly, exercise and leisure activities hold a very important part in the personal development of a child. Sports like running, swimming, basketball, football involves burning of calories and keeps them fit. Fun activities like drawing, painting and games relax the mind which increases the grasping power. For example, the statistical studies of last three years shows that obesity is one of the most leading diseases among the teenagers and undoubtedly lack of physical exercise has contributed a major role.
Secondly, fun and games strengthens the bonding among the children. They mingle and talk freely with each other which increase the communication and reduce the gap between them. Children get united as they start liking each other’s company. They wait for the weekends to enjoy and have fun together. A main contribution have to come from the parents as well as they should take the first initiative to make sure that their children are involved in extracurricular activities and not pressurized only with studies to achieve good grades.
To conclude, educational and leisure activities are both important for the children. They collectively play a vital role in a successful education system. Therefore, the government should make sure that a sufficient amount of time is spared weekly by the schools for fun and leisure activities for all children. Healthy individual’s leads to healthy society and this will avoid any problems in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ociety and this will avoid any problems in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34448160535 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9593163142 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57525083612 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5904712999 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.875 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231064373714 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761091755619 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602001745721 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14535480497 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738775397232 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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