Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they
are a complete waste of time.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
Extra-curricular activities are really necessary for the mental and physical growth and creativity of children but some people have the concept that they must be related to academics otherwise they are not worth the time of their children and are a burden on them. I, however, disagree with this notion and believe that recreational activities help in the growth and improvement of capabilities of children and bring out their hidden talents.
Recreational activities apart from studies help the children nourish their capabilities and provide them an opportunity to explore their hidden interests and undiscovered talents. Ventures like trips, painting competitions and sports bring out the enthusiasm in children and releases the pressure of studies off of their minds. There is no denying the benefits of exercising such hustles as they help cordon off the burden of studies and provide fresh start. Once, I could not prepare myself for studies as the exams were approaching, so the university organized a trip to a beautiful valley, Naran to freshen up the students and awake a new zeal in them. This actually helped a lot of pupils to start studying after having some time off.
As it is a proven fact that excess of anything is bad. So, in order to avoid developing the habits of extra entertainment, there some control must be impose to limit the leisure activities to a certain extent. Adventures should be kept according to the age and requirement of the pupils enjoying them. For example, skydiving should not be offered to school going kids since the risk of falling is higher as they have less control and strength. They should be held under proper check and supervision of seniors.
To sum up, I pen down saying that recreational activities are very necessary for the development and relaxation of children’s brains and bodies. A balance between studies and pleasure should be maintained for students to enjoy all aspects of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing after having some time off. As it is a proven fact that excess of anyt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, really, so, thus, apart from, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15576323988 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86821331932 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554517133956 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6769734767 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.214285714 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174127710397 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573399502176 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493812695923 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113606553274 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492153868414 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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