Some people believe that construction of new public buildings such as museums, town halls and sporting facilities is more important than renovation of the existing ones, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is an undeniable fact that ancient buildings are the pride and heritage of the nation. It has been always sparked heated debate for many decades, whether the government should restore old buildings or not? Some masses believe that new structures should be constructed whilst others believe renovating of the existing ones. This essay will elaborate on both the views and give opinions in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, there are multifarious benefits to constructing new public buildings. Firstly, it can uplift the standard of life. To cite an example, new playgrounds help individuals to work on physical fitness and games which are essential to keep us fit. Secondly, the construction of museums helps masses to enhance their knowledge of history and culture and it also helps individuals in giving a sigh of relief not only from their monotonous life but also from hustle and bustle in life. The government, therefore, should invest money in these historical sites.
On the flip side, can’t we renovate the old building? Certainly, there are numerous reasons to support the latter view. First and foremost, the old structure depicts our history and culture of ancient times. Secondly, historical sites must be preserved for future generations. Apart from that, these heritages are a good source of revenue for the government. To illustrate, In Rajasthan, many old monuments have been converted into hotels which can generate an ample amount of income for the government. As a result, it would be better to renovate historic buildings.
To conclude, from my perspective, the government should construct new buildings to give benefits to citizens. However, they should also renovate historical structures as they are a pivotal source of income.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, apart from, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29537366548 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82022575912 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594306049822 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8731550174 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6111111111 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168788311689 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516446051787 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063052772874 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110140133818 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692640232804 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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