Some people believe that countries should produce food that its population needs, and import food as less as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree
It is undeniable fact that nations are facing major concerns in providing an adequate amount of food to their citizens. It is often argued that government should import less quantity of food and ensure to produce all kinds of food within a country. In my opinion, I firmly believe that a nation should increase the production of domestic foods rather than importing from other countries.
Domestic food production holds a wide range of constructive benefits. To commence with, most of the government leaders in their countries are focusing on farming, irrigation, and planting which will increase employment opportunities. To illustrate, In India, the farming sector creates a high percentage of jobs. More than seventy percent of Indians are directly or indirectly dependent on the agricultural sector. Secondly, the locally produced food will have freshness and good quality than imported food. For example, most of fruits and vegetables coming in the Europe countries does not have the freshness and organic quality because it is made from the hybrid process.
Furthermore, the countries have to pay high wages while importing food from different nations that includes transportation costs, taxation charges, custom duty charges, SGS certificate, and other charges. These all charges eventually make the price higher of goods that are imported from other countries. Consequently, every individual cannot afford in buying those imported foods. And, somehow in many poor destitute countries, people die from hunger. However, this problem can be easily solved by governmental leaders if they invest the country's budget in the domestic production of food instead of ordering the imported goods.
To conclude, it is evident that nations that are producing domestic food have given fruitful benefits to their residents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: most of the fruits; most fruits
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40357142857 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69561009338 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582142857143 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 280.0 20.2975951904 1379% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1513.0 106.682146367 1418% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 280.0 20.7667163134 1348% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 95.0 7.06120827912 1345% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273557734107 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.273557734107 0.084324248473 324% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174726455236 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756545421202 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 144.0 13.0946893788 1100% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -221.18 50.2224549098 -440% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 113.7 11.3001002004 1006% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.52 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.09 8.58950901804 257% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 114.0 10.1190380762 1127% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 114.0 10.7795591182 1058% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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