Some people believe that government should pay full course fee for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own examples and opinion
Applying for the university has become prevalent among students these days. This issue has brought dilemma among people that wether government has to offer all students free courses or not. Many people argued that government should provide an equal environment for students In order to Progress effectively. However, this is essay disagree with the opinion.
First and foremost, providing all students free education requires a huge amount of money which is not reasonable especially in developing countries. In addition, if all the students study free of charge, no scholarships or grants would be awarded to talented students. As a result, some students have no incentive to studying hard for achieving a Grant. This is clearly seen in some universities in Iran. Due to this fact, students become carefree and easygoing to their courses.
Secondly, free education for all university students is very costly which not all government can afford it. It is a wise opinion that the students pay their courses in order to invest the money for gifted students. American universities are following this strategy. All students of these universities have to pay money to participate in classes except students who have got number A in each semester. As their universities have a great reputation in training unique students, their method is a desire to follow.
Consequently, beneficial ramifications can be seen while students have to pay for their classes. Such as awarding scholarships by the money which is given from other students. Also, students encouraged to pass their courses with flying numbers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f all the students study free of charge, no scholarships or grants would be award...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37795275591 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8750833957 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547244094488 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1395639441 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.3529411765 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9411764706 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240499559289 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898371273589 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555531397359 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161033785971 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578862124133 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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