Some people believe that having a pet such as a cat or a dog helps old people to have a more enjoyable life and to stay healthier.
How do you think old people benefit from having a pet?
Do you think there are any problems in old people having a pet?
Today people care more about the quality of older citizens’ life. A mass of people holds that having pets make a profound contribution to optimizing people health and making their life more delightful. Although this view has strong opinions, having pets can cause some drawbacks.
From a physiological point of view, because of life-style’s changes, senior citizens most of the times live alone and suffer from illness such as depression. So, these kinds of animals give people the opportunity to fulfill their loneliness. Besides that, not only do pets help to mental issues but also it allows people to do exercise. For example, in a normal situation, elderly groups have no inherent tendency to go out. However, when they keep animals, they have to spend times with them outside, which is well worth the effort. Last but not list, another prized aspect of having some pets like dogs are that they can aware their owners of some hazards such as firing or thieves.
On the downside, having pets can leads to some disadvantages like health and financial problems for owners. Firstly, From a medical point of view, some times, animals’ hairs or furs cause allergic reactions in a flock of people, which cost a lot for patients to cure. Besides that, animals can carry some diseases’ virus, which cures waste a considerable amount of money and energy of elderly groups. Secondly, pets need close attention like babies, such as washing them, or they need some times to play. While older people may have not enough strength and concentration to do such activities and in corollary, it may cause some physical problems for them, such as suffering broken bones.
In conclusion, despite the fact that the gains of having pets are measurable, some times, it causes some side effects for individuals.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69859840164 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0211698799 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.133333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354366846328 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123492917987 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755593485307 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235569546229 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069421091499 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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