Some people believe that for a hobby to be enjoyable it should be hard to acquire or learn. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
People always have hobbies to occupy their free time. Many individuals advocate that to make it joyful, it should not be easy to gain or learn. I stand on the same side of individuals who cite that the hobbies could be complex. This essay will discuss the reasons and illustrations for my standing.
Hobbies are past-time activity for people because it keeps them occupied and divert them from their stressful life .Moreover; a hobby will make people not only active but also smart. For some people an easy task of a hobby will be convenient as it take less time. This is because, nowadays people are more occupied with studies or work to keep-up the pace as a consequence the availability of the time is very less, which in-turn has a limited amount of time to spare on hobbies. For example, collecting coins and stamps which will not take any time, there are the parts of daily life.
However, masses choose to have some hobbies which are often hard to do and learn to enjoy the outcomes. This is because they are interesting which involves physical and mental activities. Sometimes these activities could turn into main career path and put an individual on impeccable level. Cricket in India is a hobby for most of the people and it is also a passion to play. Although it is a complex game to understand and should spare a lot of physical effort to play, most of the Indian first class players had chosen cricket as a hobby in their childhood, as a result, they became perfect and now they are playing for India. This is one of the prominent reasons to choose a hard past-time activity.
In conclusion leisure time activities are ubiquitous in every person, some choose to have a simple hobby because of some constraints, but in my opinion selecting a hard hobby will make it interesting and enjoyable experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69375 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54760150681 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1551463857 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.133333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291394747299 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103524941497 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634859101366 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18163047159 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316050362476 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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