It is true that, many individuals introspect that if any elderly people would do work after the retirement or around 60 so it is a worrying trend. However, I also agree with this statement.
To start with, work is being done in this contemporary era by older people so it is not a great thing. However, due to older people who still working after the age of 60, younger people are having to face lots of problem. For example, younger people do not have any job to do so the heinous steps is also being taken like kidnapping, robbing, stealing e.t.c, by younger people. Older people work efficiency is also less as compare to younger people. In addition, younger people can also do anything with high speed and full of concentration rather than older people.
Looking at the other view, if people work after the age of 60 so there can be lots of reason behind this. For example, many students have settled in abroad and some parents has no child . so their parents get bore at home so they work. And they also work for running their home, medicines e.t.c. Moreover, older people have experienced so they can do anything.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly elderly people are working so it is a good for social development yet. We must understand that population is escalating day by day as well as crime because older people are taking place of younger people. Furthermore, it is not good for economy as well as country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, well, for example, in addition, as well as, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66798418972 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50505410133 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.433683675 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3571428571 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297342873803 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117110077154 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851311732639 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187685420731 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581503967328 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.