Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Please write and submit your essay on the above topic.
Some people assert that, it is tough to reside in cities, while other condemn this notion and instead think that it is getting much simpler. Big cities nowadays are struggling with traffic and pollution issues however they provide better accessibility to amenities. This essay with portray both the aspects in the upcoming segments.
Firstly, with the increase in population, cities are now facing tremendous traffic issues. Even for a small distance travel, people have to spend hours in the traffic jam. As per the recent publication of the Ministry of transport, in most of the metropolitan cities there has been a whopping 45% increase in the purchase of personal vehicle in the past decade. This has adversely affected the level of toxic gases in the air and has aroused smog issues.
On the other hand, cities provide better accessibility to facilities such as schools, hospitals and offer better career prospects. For instance numerable universities and hospitals are located in the downtown and thus it is more convenient for students and citizens who are living nearby. In addition to this, many multinational companies are situated in the cities and thus working professionals have better options to find a job. Both the aspects are vital when it comes to rating the ease of living of a person.
Considering both sides of the coin, I firmly believe that living in cities is getting easier as the modernization and development of cities is directly benefiting the lives of the citizens. Although there is some health risks which cannot be completely ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y benefiting the lives of the citizens. Although there is some health risks which cannot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1439688716 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74672895962 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579766536965 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0731775878 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.692307692 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185273297019 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568895346793 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547611859677 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11231773637 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061276969749 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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