Some people believe that money is the best gift for teenagers while others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
people always get in a dilemma to decide whether they should give cash money to adolescents as a gift or not.some think that it is recommended to present teenagers cash money. Conversely, others oppose this opinion and they prefer to give them some needed staff. I side with not giving them cash money as a gift but other useful things for them.
On the one hand, people think that cash money gifts should be given to teenagers normally as they cannot decide what teenagers like and what they do not like so they prefer to present them cash money to let them buy what they need rather than the gifted things which they will not use. Moreover, they believe that teenagers will feel some independence, which is a needed feeling by them at this age when they have enough cash money and buy their personal staff by themselves. For instance, according to a survey made by the Chinese association, 65 percent of the adolescents have preferred getting cash money as a present. That's why people prefer this view.
On the other hand, some believe that money should never be presented to teenagers. The core of the argument is, teenagers don't posse maturity and probably they will misuse this money in wrongdoings and immoral activities. What is more, they simply can waste this money on unuseful things because they are not aware of how to spend money in the right way.For example, a study has been made in USA about teenagers and spending money and this study illustrates that the more teenagers have enough money, the more they do worngdoings.Hence, I strongly agree with this group of people
to conclude, after analyzing both viewpoints, I think that giving youngsters cash money could be more problmatic than benefcial. So, in my opinion, we can mix between getting them things they will use and not giving them cash money by let them choose their gift while buying it.
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but, conversely, hence, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76923076923 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45181927382 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495384615385 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.995523332 49.4020404114 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.909090909 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5454545455 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255956352081 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126922508176 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422908323067 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184768424569 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481693819736 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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