The modern world is full of possibilities. Today in the 21st century we have tons of choices whether in the field of technology or in the field of career. Yes, I agree with the statement that people now-days have too many choices. To support my point following examples can be taken into consideration.
Firstly the ability to have too many choices when deciding the career. Now-days students are not restricted to one career. Universities allow students to choose multiple subjects as a part of their curriculum in-turn helping them to be prepared for the "hot" job market. A student studying electronics can take Data Analytics and Statistics as a subject and in-turn have a degree in that.
This has helped students to be in a better position when deciding for their career as it provides them with multiple career opportunities in case one sector or career option faces a slump. For example in 2011, the recession in the IT sector made it clear that the IT industry which was once thought to be bullet-proof faced a slump and had to lay a prolific number of employees. Many IT professionals lost their job and found it hard to find jobs as they did not have relevant skills for the same. But the situation is not the same now-days because of the multiple choices people have even before they enter the job market.
Secondly, the choices in the field of technology. Take an example of mobile market. The availability of too many choices in the mobile market has revolutionized the whole of the cellphone sector. People can choose from dozens of options when they want to buy a cellphone, depending upon the brand, price range, and specifications. This leads to consumer advantage as no company now has its own monopoly over the market. The healthy competition among the mobile companies has provided the customers to have a vivid range of options and that too at very reasonable prices. The technology sector is growing and becoming diverse day by day and providing consumers a set of options that were very limited in earlier times.
In the end, I would conclude by saying that now-days people have many choices and if these choices are used wisely they can help people in choosing the best for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 227, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
.... For example in 2011, the recession in the IT sector made it clear that the IT indust...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 260, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...ion in the IT sector made it clear that the IT industry which was once thought to be b...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84251968504 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73099603828 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51968503937 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.856589718 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.25 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.05 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195687238869 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659241781602 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773579775132 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12928600039 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528764210721 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.