Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Choices plays a crucial role in every one’s life, be it good or bad. Of late, a few people are of the opinion the current generation are having a lot of varieties to pick and choose from. I totally agree that people have a myriad number of options to select from.
The most compelling reason to validate my current stance in favour of several preferences enjoyed by the people of today. Nowadays simply people have an immense amount of choices. And this kind of variety seems to highly please a consumerist society. Previously people had two or three kinds of picks to make, but in today’s era simply you name it, and you can have it. Nonetheless, only if; you have the finances to support your cravings. For example, in the range of Apple I Phones itself there is a series of models available in varied colours, each one comes with a set of unique features as well as it comes with different price tags. So, if you know your needs than all you need to do is to pay it online or in cash and avail of the product at your convenience. Thus, the available variety of goods seems to meet everyone’s requirement to the tee.
Another valid reason to substantiate my claim, that agrees that nowadays we have got multiple options to choose for be it in the sector of education, careers. In the section of services to, online banking, net banking or even personal banking as well as even up to the death of the person if he would like to opt for organ donation, burial or even a cremation. This all is possible due to the phenomenal technological and even scientific development that too, at a rapid pace. For instance, as compared to the yesteryears there was entertainment in the form of radio and televisions but nowadays internet, theatre, cinema, stand-up comedy shows, game shows etc. are available. So of course we lead a convenient as well as an eventful life thanks to the vast range of choices.
There are some people who would disagree with my sstatemnt about abundant choices being available in the market as according to their needs, tastes or even their prefences they might not be able to meet their particular requiremenst,regardless of haviing a colossal amount of dispoable money on hands
To sum up my exposition. I would like to further add to the fact that nowadays a bountiful amount of varied options has eased our life as it comes with multiple selections compared to the archaic times which came with very few options.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , regardless
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nonetheless, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, kind of, of course, you know, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 433.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69053117783 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78259272003 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554272517321 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.536959134 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.833333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0555555556 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245863163663 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653116611637 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493032028444 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110117749619 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413664521635 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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