Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Choices plays a crucial role in every one’s life, be it good or bad. Of late, a few people are of the opinion the current generation are having a lot of varieties to pick and choose from. I totally agree that people have a myriad number of options to select from.
The most compelling reason to validate my current stance in favour of several preferences enjoyed by the people of today. Nowadays simply people have immense amount of choices. And this kind of variety seems to highly please a consumerist society. Previously people had two or three kinds of picks to make, but in today’s era simply you name it, and you can have it. Nonetheless only if; you have the finances to support your cravings. For example, in the range of Apple IPhones itself there is a series of models available in varied colours, each one comes with a set of unique features as well as it comes with different price tag. So, if you know your needs than all you need to do is to pay it online or in cash and avail of the product at your convenience. Hence the available variety of goods seems to meet everyone’s requirement to the tee.
Another valid reason to substantiate my claim, that agrees that nowadays we have got multiple options to choose for be it in the sector of education, careers. In the section of services to, online banking, net banking or even personal banking as well as even up to the death of the person if he would like to opt for organ donation, burial or even a cremation. This all is possible due to the phenomenal technological and even scientific development that too at a rapid pace. For instance, as compared to the yesteryears there was entertainment in the form of radio and televisions but nowadays internet, theatre, cinema, stand-up comedy shows, game shows etc. are available. So of course we lead a convenient as well as an eventful life thanks to the vast range of choices.
There may be many people of the opinion that up till now enough variety of goods and services are not available according to their taste, perceptions or wants. Due to the simple fact that they must be having a lot of disposable funds on hands, yet still, maybe struggling to satiate their hankerings
To sum up my exposition. I would like to further add to the fact that nowadays a bountiful amount of varied options has eased our life as it comes with multiple selections compared to the archaic times which came with very few options.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nonetheless,
...imply you name it, and you can have it. Nonetheless only if; you have the finances to suppo...
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Line 3, column 768, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ail of the product at your convenience. Hence the available variety of goods seems to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, nonetheless, so, still, well, for example, for instance, kind of, of course, you know, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 41.998997996 179% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63302752294 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64025396472 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548165137615 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0805755432 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.315789474 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9473684211 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23580355633 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636155345728 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515862121416 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106793818358 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448878515727 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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