Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is considering by some that in modern times people have a plethora of options for everything. In my opinion, I agree people have loads of choices for a basic necessity such as food and education as a consequence.
First and foremost, food is one of the primary requirement for the human beings to survive and today, they have many options to eat. In the olden days, there were only a few choices such as homemade food and local food in restaurants and supermarkets. Tremendous consumer demand has urged regional companies for developing types of edible products at a competitive rate. Moreover, today, global cuisines and food brands are available in most parts of the world to the customers. For example, a couple of decades ago, in India, only traditional food was available in eateries, but nowadays, many multinational restaurants and food joints offering a variety of authentic Italian, Mexican, Chinese, Asian, and many more dishes.
On the other hand, education is the key to build a successful career in any domain. A few years ago, academic institutes were educating in conventional ways with limited sources, however, nowadays colleges and universities are tying up with world-renowned educational institutes to teach plenty of subjects innovatively. One clear example, in one of the colleges in Gujarat, India has affiliated with a recognized international university for the post-graduate program and pupils gets best of both, by attending virtual classes using technological advancement.
In conclusion, the modern world offers a lot of alternatives in many aspects to everyone, and in my view, it will increase in the future for the betterment of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, moreover, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25278810409 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11987394145 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598513011152 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2109302167 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.454545455 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108830184532 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041876961224 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427237852529 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070206666972 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478743658464 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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