Some people believe that people should marry for love ; others think people should marry for money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The argument over whether to marry for love or for money has not been settled yet. While many would argue that economic stability in relationships, which only comes when a person choose life partner on the basis of wealth, is imperative in life, I believe marrying for love always brings happiness and prosperity in life no matter how much money one has.
On the one hand, seeking life partner who has strong financial background and well earning job is a practical approach towards life as it entails economic security for couples. In fact, many a times relationships turn hostile or even come on the brink of divorce just because of insufficient funds to support life. Therefore, they believe it is wiser to choose a partner who is able to bear all day-to-day expenses and fulfil family's every need, vanishing monetary threats. However, I believe despite having no financial problem some relationships do not last long because of no or little mutual understanding between marriage partners.
On the other hand, marriage based on love produces a strong emotional bond between man and woman,which is essential for happy married life. In other words, such couples rather have less money but they understand each other very well and try to support in life adversities. This provides them strength and emotional stability that infuse enormous confidence in them to do well in their respective careers, resulting happy and prosperous life. This school of thought seems prudent to me as it is a fact that loving and caring couples are likely to raise their children in a better way.
In conclusion, although pecuniary aspects play an important role in a marriage as they stem financial stability and security in life, love in my opinion is of utmost importance as it connects two persons emotionally thus enables them to back each other in difficult situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04530744337 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72350431029 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598705501618 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4706384995 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.727272727 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154001569041 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663667315337 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709409474521 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984958882677 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617107283011 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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