Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion?
It is often deemed by some that securing a job after school is more beneficial, while others argue that a successful future requires a proper university education. In my opinion the higher the education level is, the better are the chances of a successful life is.
On the one hand, there are those who argue the college education is a necessity for acquiring a respected job and salary. They believe in today's world almost every sector is a deep profession and requires specific scientific knowledge where it should be gathered at the university. Specialties such as Doctors, Engineers to name a few require specific and clear fundamentals of their field as failure to know so maybe threatening to the people who are dependent on them. Furthermore, they state that majority of employers search for candidates with higher educations as it is a guarantee for their developed character and knowledge in their field. For instance a medical doctor graduate is both well respected by the society and has a high chance of being employed and is independent enough to start their own private clinic if they choose to do so.
On the other hand, some believe that a university degree is not all it takes to have a successful career. Firstly, starting a job after school provides the person to develop their personality at an earlier age and gain experience require in their field. Moreover, such an early start can allow to them bloom in their job over the period of time and eventually achieve a promotion and salary raise. Secondly, not all jobs can be succeeded by holding a degree, it is often observed that managerial positions are handled by people of practical knowledge in that field.
To conclude, it is often a point of argument whether it is better to start a job after school or a post-college degree. In my opinion, it is inevitable to ignore the fact that a college degree carries a lot of knowledge and is a necessity for the majority of the jobs, therefore it would guarantee a successful future to the person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...low to them bloom in their job over the period of time and eventually achieve a promotion and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80515759312 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78229249909 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521489971347 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.2938916706 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8461538462 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226390023399 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856614907935 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759280076341 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151737769494 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591441150142 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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