Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
discuss both views and give your opinion.
Whether continuing formal education after school or not has provoked many debates recently. While some people are of the opinion that for succeeding in career path it is best to enter university, others, however, believe that getting employed right after school is a better decision.
On the one hand, the supporters of studying at university and college assert that the benefits accruing from this are by no means negligible. Firstly, it is widely believed that the higher-level degree one holds, the higher chance they stand to get better-paid jobs. In other words, many youngsters are urged to continue their formal education in the hope of being employed by more prestigious and high-paid (well-paid) jobs in the future. Second, these would-be graduates and post-graduates believe that studying at university will contribute to being a professional and qualified job seeker. In this way, job recruiters may give them an advantage over the candidates who lack university degrees.
On the other hand, I firmly believe that if one desires to be successful in career path per se, they need to start working as soon as possible. First and foremost, apart from high-ranked universities, training students just in some theoretical subject, most universities and colleges simply fail to prepare their alumni for the life after education. Nowadays, at least in my country, the majority of companies look for prospective employees who have hands-on experience. It simply means that the time that only one’s degree would guarantee a job is over. Skills like foreign languages, computer and problem-solving skills Qualifications like foreign languages, computer, and problem-solving skills are suitable illustrations in this respect; all of which are completely ignored in the universities in my area. Thus, should the youth enter the job market as earlier as possible, they will probably continue their upward career trajectory more readily compared to their educated counterparts.
In conclusion, Although I am not entirely against university education, however, the number of these educational sites in which graduates are truly trained for the future in the job market are in minority. Therefore, it is a much wiser step to get a job straight after school in most cases.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 865, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from, at least, in conclusion, in most cases, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36414565826 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98188185428 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582633053221 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8759881969 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4666666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310037188417 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940040328287 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07827250137 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189135617152 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705440317995 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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