More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but cities can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
Nowadays, the number of emigrants moving to cities in the hope of higher life standards is skyrocketing. City life, however, is not that easy, in contrast, it can be a huge challenge. There exist a number of problems that newcomers would face. At the same time, some measures can be taken by authorities to improve life in urban areas.
Clearly, leaving villages and then settling in big cities are not without its conundrums. First and foremost, it would take a prolonged period of time to assimilate into the dominant culture of metropolitans. Being total strangers and not knowing any people, these immigrants may suffer being far away from their family as well as their hometown. Second, the cost of living in cities is much higher than it is in rural areas. Unfortunately, these newcomers would have to sell their lands back in their town, if they own any, or work for lower wages jobs just to cover their basic needs. Thus, most of them might not be able to lead a happy life in cities.
However, the role of lawmakers can be of paramount importance in this respect. Should they intensify their efforts to facilitate urban areas more, a fewer number of their individuals will desert their hometown looking for a brighter future. Giving out suitable loans or mortgages, providing them with up-to-date technologies and facilities that city dwellers have, and constructing modern healthcare centers and educational buildings are salient illustrations in this matter. People in power should also give financial incentives and tax discounts to the farmers in order to encourage them to stay and cultivate their lands. In this way, many job prospects will be available to young job seekers of these places.
In conclusion, it has never been easy to migrate to urban areas, particularly from rural places. I firmly believe that legislators of each country can mitigate the negative consequences of this modern phenomenon by supporting indigenous people of villages and small towns.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...and foremost, it would take a prolonged period of time to assimilate into the dominant culture...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, then, thus, well, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07339449541 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76678482047 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623853211009 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6662330863 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5882352941 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237130623159 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752996532548 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687946655402 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144695455792 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816322959354 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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