You will be celebrating your son’s 6th birthday next week. you want to invite one of your colleagues to attend the birthday party. Write an invitation letter to this colleague.
• invite your colleague to your son’s birthday
• give details of the party and its date and time
• say how happy you and your family would be to have him/her at the party
Dear Jack Brown,
I am James Smith, your coworker from the administrative section of the company. I hope this letter finds you and your lovely family well, and I am writing to invite you to my son’s 6th birthday celebration.
The party is going to be held in a beautiful and well-designed garden that can be found in a secluded area in the suburb. My wife is so obsessed with the location and she has been looking for this place for over two weeks. So, I am sure it will be a great evening for all of us, as well as our young children. We have picked the last Sunday of December which is the 18th. Because it is a holiday, guests will not suffer from traffic congestion. And It will start at 5 pm.
You know how much Sara gets along well with your wife since the last seminar that they met each other. We are honored to have you as well as your children. In fact, Sara really insists on seeing your wife, and in turn, she will not accept a no. I will also attach the location for your convenience.
We are really looking forward to seeing you at the party.
Best regards,
James Smith
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, well, in fact, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26442307692 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2985345135 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600961538462 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9044775833 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.3571428571 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264121287307 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818761985813 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955939423613 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160528669252 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119418312782 0.0580467560999 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.