You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter,
• say what the problem is
• describe the accommodation you thought you were getting
• ask the provider to solve the problem
Dear Mr. Johnson,
My name is Jack Smith, the new student of the entry of the winter of 2021, and I am writing in regard to the room that I have been provided with. Unfortunately, there exists a huge problem with it that makes it difficult to stay.
Before that, I really appreciate all of your considerations for my admission process. However, there is a conundrum about my room that is concerned with my roommate. Firstly, he is extremely loud in his room. He has been constantly listening to some rock music, he is into this genre apparently, in the evening when I am supposed to do my assignment. To make the matter worse, some of his friends come over on a regular basis, and in turn, I find it so irritating and cannot rest properly.
Truth to be told, When we were having a discussion on Skype over the type of accommodation which I was going to have, I was promised a bedsit with no roommate, since it is impossible for me to concentrate on my studies when someone else is in the place. And, this is not what we had agreed on.
Therefore, I sincerely ask you to resolve this situation by whether finding me a private studio or, at least, changing my current roommate with someone more like-minded who only wants to study.
Thank you in advance, and I kindly await your response.
Yours sincerely,
Jack Smith
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, firstly, however, if, really, so, therefore, at least, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.575 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71230478048 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641666666667 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8347880141 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 4.34317383033 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12917042222 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467000476881 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358388779021 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714073979757 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370309713357 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.