some people believe that teachers have a important role to play in educational success, while other thinks it is student's attitude that matters. Discussed both views and share your opinion.
In today's modern and technological era, Education is must and if a person is not educated than it's like Fish without water. Today's time, governments are also supporting for education industry at the same time they contribute funds also in education field so that student can get by middle class or poor class person relatively at very low cost.
When childs' are small they are liked a water, if you put the water in to a glass it will take glass shape. If you put the same water in to a different shape of article it will mould them self to adjust in to the different article shape. In a nuts shell, When Children's are small than it is a teacher duty to mould them and make him a good person. When Teacher thought a lesson or share his experience, than student will get good exposures relating to real life. Out of 24 hours a day student spend almost 1/2 time is spent either with school teacher or Tution teachers. So Student will learn from teachers behaviour and plan of action.
When teacher's tough to their student than, Its student responsibility also to pay attention with full of concentration, It will definitely help the to those who will pay attention. If students are not serious or don't want to lean they won't be able to get success in life.
So In my view it is the Teachers as well as Student, both are important factor for education success. If any one of them are not serious than other on stand alone basis can not make education success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e of them are not serious than other on stand alone basis can not make education success.
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...e of them are not serious than other on stand alone basis can not make education success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49063670412 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45251727809 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546816479401 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7719191837 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9166666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164132523773 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071380294991 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676255110047 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119279718476 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738960596173 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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