Some people believe that technology has made man more social and others think that less social. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Technology dominates human life today. It has been interwoven in our routine life. Some people considered that technology has made man more social active while others think that less social. There is a strong argument on both side. I think that if we are careful about its right usage, the social benefits are clearly positive. I will discuss both the opinions with examples.
The arrival of the internet has bridge the long-distance communication gap between friends and families. Such as one can connect to another anywhere, anytime to touch a button. Moreover, it is easy and beneficial to connect people who can live in abroad. Social networking site such as facebook is the primer example of this. Furthermore, it is also beneficial for education purpose.
On the other hand, there are some people who hold a different opinion and think that the excess use of technology deprives of real human interaction which is an important aspect of every bond. One example of this that modern children prefer to spend their time on mobile to play games rather than playing outdoor games. As a result, children do not get chance to communicate with their friends and families. However, they can also connect with their colleagues and relatives to playing games like chess, business, and pool so on.
To conclude and give my opinion, I would say that the use of the internet is the right way then the clearly the social benefits are positive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, i think, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00411522634 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56537413904 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604938271605 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1794377542 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1875 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320184961583 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875768017304 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13983757987 0.0667982634062 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181688558832 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163182638823 0.056905535591 287% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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