Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individuals crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this day and age, there are various ways to jugde any crime whether anyone commits it accidentally or not. While some people argue that it may be an appropriate way to have a fixed punishment for several criminal, I side with those who believe that we should depend on the circumstances of each person who commit any crime.
There are many reason why need to have a fixed punishment for each type of crime. First, it allows criminals to be treated fairly and ensures that no one will be discriminated against. If the crime is more serious, prison is the most common punishment for any criminal. Another one is that these individuals often pose a threat to the whole society, so they should put in prison to ensure the safety of other citizens. For example, some criminals who happen a case of murder and drug dealer always bring many threats for each society.
However, it is clear that we should consider the circumstances of anyone who commit the crime. The main one is that some criminal really don’t want to commit any crime, and they only do this activity by the accidental method. For instance, the self defense to murder someone can make the jury think about reduce the penalty of this criminal or innocent. Moreover, someone who have guilty often get a problem in their family, so the magistrate should know about the family circustance of anyone before judging any criminal. Take the bugarly as the particular example. The mainly reason why some individuals conduct this action is satisfied their basic needs.
To conclude, it is a great debate to talk about what kind of punishment should the jury conduct to any kind of criminal. However, I strongly believe that the jury should think about many features of this person so that they can have an appropriate penalty for any lawbreaker.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'commits'.
Suggestion: commits
... ways to jugde any crime whether anyone commit it accidentally or not. While some peop...
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
... any criminal, that’s mean when someone want to fined any crime, they will base on a...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... for any criminal. Another one is that this individuals often pose a threat to the ...
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Line 3, column 564, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun threat seems to be countable; consider using: 'many threats'.
Suggestion: many threats
... of murder and drug dealer always bring many threat for each society. However, it is cle...
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Line 5, column 618, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'satisfied'.
Suggestion: satisfied
...some individuals conduct this action is satisfy their basic needs. To conclude, it i...
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Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun feature seems to be countable; consider using: 'many features'.
Suggestion: many features
...elieve that the jury should think about many feature of this person so that they can have an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, while, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69018404908 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42205644216 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493865030675 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5827955877 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.933333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359490803675 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126742795646 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969271247507 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234739415392 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948823807648 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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