Some people believe that university education should be free for all. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
it is argued by some that tertiary education should be provided for everyone free of charge. I totally disagree with this statement because universities need money to maintain the quality of their facilities and people would no longer take this level of education seriously when they could study for free.
All university institutions require money from tuition fees in order to keep providing their students with studying necessities. this is because maintaining a good condition of studying materials in library costs a lot of money and all lecturers want a stable and acceptable income to keep teaching with enthusiasm. if students were offered tertiary education for free, institutions would soon not be able to provide them with the best studying experience. For example, the community college of Ben Tre province in Vietnam reported that their students had to learn in extremely dirty auditories and practice with unfunctional equipment in the laboratories.
Another reason not to give higher education for free is that people would not be serious with their study anymore. this is to say, people have a tendency to try everything if it costs nothing. Hence, if universities were offered free of charge, more students would enroll in courses, but, they would not likely come to finish their courses entirely. For instance, a survey in Ho Chi Minh City showed that a large number of adults would agree to go to college if it did not cost them money and most of them said that they would absolutely quit after one or two years.
In conclusion, universities should not offer their education for free because they need money to maintain their facilities and more people will come only for the purpose of experience, not for true studying.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07638888889 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70394052584 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8786344455 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.909090909 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245620742414 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113057222778 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085568181084 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181113800307 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590496372508 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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