Scientists agree that many people are eating too much junk food and it is damaging to their health. Some people think that these problems can be solved by educating people to eat less junk food. Other people believe that education will not work. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
Opinions differ as to whether educating is the solution for the high consumption of junk food or not. In my opinion, I believe that the idea to educate people will not solve such a society’s problem.
To begin with, it is understandable why people say that the rate of junk-food consuming could be reduced by educating consumers. One reason is that letting people know about the negative effects on their health may deter them from using too much fast food. For example, when individuals are informed about the serious physical conditions associated with the high intake of fat coming from junk food such as potential heart diseases and diabetes, they would somewhat reconsider to eat a lesser amount of these foods regularly. With the help of scientists and their research, people may assume that providing the lessons of health problems related to fast food would convince people to turn to healthier choices of food.
However, I side with those who think that education is not an effective solution. One reason to support my standpoint is that, in today’s world, people, especially workers, will pay no attention to some educational billboard on the road or any other types of education as they are too busy making a living. Therefore, any attempts to deliver health information about food will be wasted in terms of time and money. Furthermore, humans are living a fast-paced life which means that they absolutely need to substitute healthy, yet, expensive and time-consuming meals in order to focus on their more important businesses. As can be seen, people will continue to buy junk food regardless of potential health issues for it is much faster and cheaper and thus, education will be of futility at this point.
In conclusion, I assert that giving knowledge about the bad impacts of junk food on humans’ health will have no influence on people’s daily consumption of this type of food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Opinions differ as to whether educating is the solution for the high ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0534591195 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81556845677 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594339622642 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4246670841 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.916666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474466832919 0.244688304435 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17187484694 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880670372489 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283637065144 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613065098897 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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