You recently organized an all- day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
Say what the participants liked about the hotel (meeting room is spacious with great air conditioning, have great views of the city, chairs comfortable)
Explain why they were unhappy about the food (lobster dish overcooked, steaks are still raw inside, serving bit slow)
Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future (recheck before bringing out dishes, have more people to serve)
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter with regard to the hall I booked two weeks ago to organize a full-day meeting for my company.
I have received feedback from the employees who participated that day and most of them said they loved the meeting hall. they all mentioned the wide space of the hall and the great air conditioning. Moreover, the employees were absolutely amazed by the perfect views of the city from above.
One thing I need to report is the food. Many participants said that their steaks were overcooked and some people got raw shrimps on their dishes. Also, it took a bit too long to serve lunch and dinner to my employees.
I would suggest that you recheck the food before bringing out to make sure that it is cooked perfectly and that you have more people to reduce the serving time. I believe these adjustments when done will please every customer of yours.
I still look forward to booking at your hotel in the future as I believe you will improve your service.
Kind regards
Truong
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... them said they loved the meeting hall. they all mentioned the wide space of the hal...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...will please every customer of yours. I still look forward to booking at your h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, still, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69060773481 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40033472427 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690607734807 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9481537134 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1818181818 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320413634005 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836649542967 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634055105647 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140936780485 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460037430524 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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