You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter:give details of the jobexplain why it is important to yousuggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

Essay topics:

You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.
Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter:
give details of the job
explain why it is important to you
suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

Dear Professor Johnson,

I am writing this letter with regard to a reference letter from you that I need to apply for a job.

I want to submit my application to Activision, a famous software and gaming developing company in Silicon Valley. it will be a full-time job and I will work as a back-end developer for the company’s newest gaming project which will be released in 2021.

I have included all prove of education in my portfolio but a letter of reference is the most important part because it evidently proves my skills and abilities. Moreover, you are widely well-known among the developers community and I believe a letter from you will surely promote my credibility to the employer.

I would be grateful if you could mention my android game, which won the annual software contest last year, in the letter. it was the very first time that I coded a full product by myself and I am still very proud of that.

I really hope that you could give me this favor.

Yours faithfully,

Truong Nguyen

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...g developing company in Silicon Valley. it will be a full-time job and I will work...
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Line 9, column 123, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...tware contest last year, in the letter. it was the very first time that I coded a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, really, so, still, well, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75842696629 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71148180318 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634831460674 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2502151135 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1111111111 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231494735683 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924479937994 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876193378883 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111031788606 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115074498174 0.0580467560999 198% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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