Some people believe that we can use animals the way we want while others believe animals have rights and we must respect their rights. What is your opinion. Use specific reasons to support your point of view.
Many people think that we can use animals whatever want while I believe that everybody must respect and treat animals with kindness and not make them suffer in any way. I believe that animals have rights to live according to their natures without abuse.
To serve human life, people use some animals products which are expensive and rare. A fur coat, such as, comes from animals namely fox, honey badger, caught in traps. The process of producing a fur coat is really a crime. This raises many ethical controversies from animal protectors.
Moreover, we exploits animals, especially endangered animals, will lead to an ecological crisis which will affect human life. For instance, the practice of shark is increasing every year. We harvests sharks for meat, cartilage, liver oil and fins used in medical. The killing of many sharks will cause oceanic ecosystem out of balance by virtue of becoming too great in some other creatures.
Human and animals live on this planet together and always have a relationship. If we want animals respect us, we have to treat them the same way. If we do not halt the use of animals products, we will motivate to generate more alternative materials in the future, as well as new cures in medical.
In conclusion, I believe that animals have rights to live happily without suffering and we must protect them under any circumstances.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'exploit'
Suggestion: exploit
...from animal protectors. Moreover, we exploits animals, especially endangered animals,...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'We' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'harvest'
Suggestion: harvest
...e of shark is increasing every year. We harvests sharks for meat, cartilage, liver oil a...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, really, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97402597403 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5495152697 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4449846773 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0714285714 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424568057046 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138171901546 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118104156418 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245183145861 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12605548117 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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