In this universe every one has right to live free life. It is basically nature's law. Therefore, everybody must respect that. I think freedom is a precious gift given by god in all perspectives and we should follow that with positive thinking.
This was always a great matter of discussion in many debates during childhood time in the school that, we must respect all the creatures evolved by God in this universe. whether, it is a small aunt or big Elephant. Perhaps, if we will become care taker of others they would also become ours the same. Masses believe that animals should remain in control of human beings. In addition, many of them use different kind animals for their earning. For example, monkeys, elephants etc..
I would like to state my opinion in favour of independence rights. Generally speaking, it always feel bad to see animals in chains. To cite an evidence that, if somebody is sentenced for imprisonment for some days, weeks or years. We literally feel bad about him/her. Indeed freedom is a priceless prize. Over and above, government has already passed an act regarding that. last year in newspaper we heard that 89% of animals were shot dead by gun around Jim Corbbet nation park. Eventually they were arrested. One big example, a famous celebrity Mr. Salman khan has been petitioned in court against the shooting of black beer in Rajasthan, India. I felt very joyful when i saw these steps taken in aspect of animals regarding their independence.
To wrap up, I just want to clarify that, rights are meant by nature, we must try to follow them. we should understand that, nature does not need destruction. Henceforth, to gain love from nature we must respect all the things
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, regarding, so, therefore, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83276450512 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54133093862 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655290102389 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3841996928 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.5652173913 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.7391304348 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91304347826 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262854023966 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591030614918 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489699079429 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150276817887 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430692227504 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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