Some people like to buy new phones, new desktop or other latest devices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The improvements in technology has had a tremendous impact on people from all ages. Because of this, people are addicted to all the latest instruments in the market such as mobile phones, desktops and other latest devices. I completely disagree with the necessity to always buy the latest device available in the market. Let us discuss this in more detail.
Some people are very tech savvy and hence wants to always stay updated about latest technology. In some cases, it is important to stay tuned with the latest handsets and devices in the market for professional reasons. For instance, people working on designing and developing an antivirus and antifraud solution for devices might need to always have information about the new features and settings on new devices.
Otherwise, there is no reason for people to always buy latest devices. While some people like to show off their new handsets and devices to their friends, few others are only obsessed with every new device launched in the market. This results in financial crunch for some people since most part of their savings is wasted on buying new devices. In few countries, most of these devices are imported from other countries like China and excessive buying of new devices would result in the increase in import of these devices. This negatively affects the economy of a country. Most of the times the new device that is launched in the market has only one or two minor changes in the features as compared to the earlier version of the device. But, the advertisement made by the company is such that, it appeals to the people and hence they buy it.
In conclusion, before buying new phones and other devices one should properly analyse and research the device for its real benefits. After the research, if the outcome still seems beneficial, only then one should buy a new one.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the latest'.
Suggestion: about the latest
... and hence wants to always stay updated about latest technology. In some cases, it is import...
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Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'buy the latest'.
Suggestion: buy the latest
...there is no reason for people to always buy latest devices. While some people like to show...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, still, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88571428571 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47146476205 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507936507937 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4223444784 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351725977962 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116788212081 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728076318859 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207618923997 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584356193374 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.