Question: Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara dessert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Nowadays tourism has extended to interesting but comparatively difficult destinations. People love to explore new and adventurous places such as deserts, Antarctic, high mountains, etc. In this essay, we discuss the advantages and disadvantages for tourists to visit such places.
Let us first discuss the benefits. Today, tourism is not limited to only known exotic places with favourable climatic conditions. People are more keen to explore various and difficult parts of the world. As a result, it helps us to understand the different aspects of nature along with the way the local inhabitants cope up with these conditions. For instance, during travelling through a dessert, if you are lost, the best way to find the correct way is through the position of the sun and the direction in which your shadow falls. Consequently, this increases our knowledge about different places. Hence, people are more interested in adventures instead of leisure.
Let us now talk about the disadvantages. At places such as deserts or Antarctic, it is difficult to get immediate medical help in case of an emergency. We have to sustain the pain until we are able to travel to some hospital or find a doctor. In deserts, people might suffer from dehydration because of hot and dry weather. If we are travelling to a high mountainous region, we can suffer from breathlessness because of low oxygen levels. In Antarctic, we can suffer from cold feet when walking in snow. Although the adventure is fun, often we are so worn out after such tours, that we have little energy to go back to the normal routine. Sometimes, due to the extreme climatic conditions, it is possible that we fell sick during the tour itself. Hence, screwing most of the trip.
As such, it is important to have such tours to difficult and adventurous places which will help us boost our confidence and feel alive.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, so, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97770700637 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8451827197 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570063694268 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4257598453 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.15 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21461176588 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578996393936 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753677207788 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153885132206 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843865707743 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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