You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Issues such as global warming and increasing population have had an impact on generations and would continue to have a negative effect in the recent future. Not having quality education only adds to these issues. In this essay we will discuss on how these issues might increase in the near future, say in the next decade, and what measure we can take to try to avoid them.
Our country, India, is one of the highly populated countries in the world. We have a growing economy, but not as much as the growing population. Due to this much of the population remains poor with no access to even the basic necessities of food, shelter and clothes, let alone education for children. Poor family planning results in couples having 2 to 4 children when they can hardly manage the upbringing of 2 children with their income. This occurs because couples usually fall under the pressure of their parents and society to give birth to child immediately after marriage. Second important issue is that the environment is worsening day by day. Use of plastic has increased tremendously over the last few decades with improper disposal. Some uneducated people even burn plastic along with other dry waste without understanding that the gas released by burning plastic is hazardous to health. Last but not the least, quality education is important for the people to understand the problem faced by the country and work towards solving it. But, education quality is lost when it comes to government schools and not all people afford to send their children to private schools.
The solutions to most of these problems can be initiated by the government. Firstly, schools should have quality education. For this, government should follow stringent process when selecting teachers in government schools. If teachers are well-educated and well cultured, they can imbibe same values in children as well. Secondly, government should imply strict policies to promote only 2 number of children per couple. They can enforce some rules from delivery to education, wherein the cost of a third child increases threefold as compared to the combined cost of the first 2 children. Government should also promote family planning schemes and education about it to the newly weds. Lastly, there should be strict rules to overcome environmental issues. For instance, plastic should be completely banned and its usage should be heavily fined. The vehicles should be strictly tested for pollution control regularly, failing which the owner should be punished.
Given we follow all these rules and recommendations strictly, we can at least lessen down the effects of most of these issues, if at all not eradicate. We should think and care about tomorrow and so make arrangements today.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...remains poor with no access to even the basic necessities of food, shelter and clothes, let alone...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, third, well, at least, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2302.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 451.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10421286031 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6529838507 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563192904656 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 703.8 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0220258765 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.08 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.04 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210634309036 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556828936489 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044804559294 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10562970005 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046976358396 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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