You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want.
To what extent should children have to follow rules?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Few countries follow strict rules of behaviour for children, while in some countries children have complete freedom similar to those of adults. Although, freedom is important for any child to learn from their own experiences, too much freedom can make children go out of control. In this essay, we will discuss both these aspects and prove it is important for enforcing few rules on children to help shape their future in a better way.
In some countries, children have all the rights to do anything they want. They can attain driving license at a particular age easily as acquiring a driving license in that country is not difficult and no separate strict rules apply for children. This increases the chances of accidents on streets. Children are allowed to travel alone by metros and trains. Although, this helps to create a level of confidence in them, it is extremely dangerous given the increasing crowd at both metro and railway stations. Even at schools, they are free to participate in any event or competition they want without the permission of their parents. This way parents are completely unaware of the activities their child is part of.
Countries should enforce strict rules for children at few places. For instance, children should follow strict and stringent rules for obtaining a driving license. This will help reduce rash driving and accidents. Even the trains and metros should have an age limit until which a child should be accompanied by an adult. Few other restrictions should be applied by schools. As an example, few of the events and competitions in schools should need a parent's conformation, without which the child should not be allowed to take part. This will help parents to keep a check on children and their activities at school and hence protect them when required. Along with this, it is also important that children have a sense of responsibility. Hence, they should be given some level of freedom, like allowing then to take local transport like city bus while travelling to school. Allowing them to take few minor decisions in school will help them build the confidence and tolerance in cases where the decision turns out to be wrong.
To conclude, children should be enforced to follow some rules very strictly, while they can still be given some independence at few places. This will help parents to shape their children’s character in a mannered way while teaching them to be independent at the same time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...d competitions in schools should need a parents conformation, without which the child s...
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Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a mannered way" with adverb for "mannered"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...o shape their children's character in a mannered way while teaching them to be independent a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, still, then, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2054.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9854368932 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65537974092 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485436893204 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2274570732 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3636363636 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.40909090909 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322506875548 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110973366647 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842016148108 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215483975942 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210277446755 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.