You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
* explain why you are writing
* describe what went wrong with the meal and service
* suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear,...
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. Patel,
I am writing with regards to the recent experience I had at your restaurant. I am part of the Youth’s Club and we come to your restaurant every other month as a get-together dinner which we enjoy a lot. Unfortunately, the latest dinner we had at your restaurant was not so much fun. Somehow, the overall experience that we had there was not pleasant at all.
Let me explain in detail. We had come to your restaurant 2 days back on 28th of June for dinner. As always, we had called the previous day for a table booking for 15 people. Instead, we were asked to wait for 15 minutes for the table to become available. I was really unfair and then what is the use of table booking over the phone? We still cooperated and waited for 15 minutes. Then we placed an order consisting of few dishes including chicken crispy and vegetable platter. I must say, the food quality was not as usual as it always is in your restaurant. Firstly, the chicken was not cooked at all. We were not even able to chew the pieces. Secondly, the vegetable platter usually have potatoes, baby corn, mushrooms, veg rolls and cauliflower pieces. But, the waiter served only potatoes, veg rolls and cauliflower. When asked, he said that baby corn and mushrooms are not available. I asked him why did not he inform me about this before preparing the order, but there was not answer from him.
Similar small issues occurred throughout our dinner. After the dinner, I even complained about this to the temporary manager that the restaurant had appointed that day due to your unavailability. In spite of this, I am writing this letter personally to you so that you can look into this matter. We were completely disappointed with this experience and I suggest your restaurant to send an apology note to our club, since we really enjoy your delicious food. Your restaurant is a real reputed one throughout this area and I wish it should remain the same.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Deepti
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...he overall experience that we had there was not pleasant at all. Let me explain ...
^^^
Line 5, column 530, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is always
...the food quality was not as usual as it always is in your restaurant. Firstly, the chicke...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 917, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'informs'.
Suggestion: informs
...t available. I asked him why did not he inform me about this before preparing the orde...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 58.0 32.9175257732 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 937.175257732 178% => OK
No of words: 354.0 206.0 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70056497175 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 3.78020617076 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68615401822 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 127.690721649 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545197740113 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 290.88556701 175% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 12.6804123711 197% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4173444647 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.56 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.16 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 3.94845360825 355% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225529703736 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623138821278 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651207833246 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15849982923 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471302121827 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.