In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
With growing population, the housing requirements are also increasing. People settle in urban areas due to better job and academic opportunities. As a result, there is no space left to build new homes in urban areas. The only space available is in the countryside. In this essay, we will debate about why there is a need to protect the countryside and restrain ourselves from building any new houses there.
First, let us discuss about why there is an increase in new homes. Along with an awareness about acquiring quality education, students have started to move out to different cities. When I did my masters, almost 60% of students from my batch had come from different cities. These students normally rent houses instead of staying in college hostels which are usually very costly. Similarly, many people move to different cities in search of good jobs and gradually settle there. As a result, there is increasing demand for building new houses but with no space left in urban areas. Hence, people are shifting to nearby countryside in search of new homes.
According to my opinion, we should protect the countryside from this urbanisation. If we start building new houses at countryside, there will be a day when there would be no difference in urban and rural areas. There are number of adverse effects due to this. Firstly, the calmness and the purity in climate would be lost. There would not be a day out at the countryside for peace. Secondly, urbanisation brings with itself crowd, pollution and stress. For instance, the place where I live was also a countryside once. But, since it is nearby to a big metropolitan city, it lost its beauty, greenery and quietness in only a few decades. Lastly, global warming is one of the major issue that cities tolerate. We should at least try to protect our rural areas from it.
Hence, to conclude, it is extremely important to protect our today’s rural from becoming tomorrow’s urban. We should preserve the countryside, so that even the future generations can experience the serene nature and innocence that countryside offer.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, similarly, so, at least, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98005698006 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76628640676 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535612535613 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7721070601 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.8333333333 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228967243446 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649784096631 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708407742301 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140240608777 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693667495234 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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